What is you're opinion of the novel i've been writing?

There's a lot of use of fiery words huh? Your chest was on fire, your leg was burning, you were burned out, you turned on the afterburners. It is quite atmospheric though, I like that, it's a bit like in Metro 2033. Just add a bit more variety to the descriptions, it's seriously important I get as clear a picture as I can, it felt a bit jumbled in my head but, it's intense.